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Re: Annasiel's TOTALLY ATTENTION GRABBING Arts

Post by TriggerHappy » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:06 pm

This title is clickbaity
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Re: Annasiel's TOTALLY ATTENTION GRABBING Arts

Post by Annasiel » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:20 pm

You posted in the thread. It worked.
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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by Annasiel » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:22 pm

Better?
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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by TriggerHappy » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:27 pm

I DON'T BELIEVE IT
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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by Jhibus » Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:44 pm

NUMBER 3 WILL SHOCK YOU
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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by ButteryPancake » Mon Apr 24, 2017 8:42 am

I had expected this from Jhibus, but you, Ser? Tsk, tsk, tsk.

Nice writing, by the way, you know I like your poems.
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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by Vintage » Thu May 18, 2017 7:59 am

Annasiel, I just want to say I adore these poems by you! I especially loved Echo's Lamentation & Paths and Ponderance. PaP has a kind of Shel Silverstein feel, y'know?
I was walking along, minding my business, when out of that orange colored sky...

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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by Annasiel » Thu May 18, 2017 10:27 am

Thank you! >-<

I read a good deal of Silverstein growing up, and that comparison made my night.
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Decrepit Lair of Edginess

Post by Annasiel » Fri May 26, 2017 8:27 pm

Swallow up my sunshine
Little fears,
Tempt away my innocence
To consequence I've yet to bear,
And let me take my path
Apart from years,
Wallow in this self-denial,
vile pity, if I care

Enough to see what I've become,
I've sucked the flesh right off my thumb,
It's not a rude awakening enough to make my faults aware.
I chain myself with empty weights
That only serve to slow my gait,
All else is a fantasy, the lie I spin that life's unfair.

I sit inside a room
I left unlit,
As if the dark can cover
Crimes of apathetic writ,
For despondent wiles,
I'm unfit
To pull my sorry corpse beyond
This gravitating pit,

I'd scream, but sleep has dried my tongue,
I'd weep, but eyes are caked in mud,
So all I do is roll and strew my whimsies through this grit,
Limbs lay bound in mind-made strands,
Unbreakable to idle hands,
A captive to the filthy sands my soul and body sit.

I cannot shift, I cannot breathe,
Smothered in the shit I've weaved,
Let me find a faithborn sieve
To sift away my flaws.

I hurt the ones I love the most,
For what else comes from languid ghosts
That wither in the paths they chose,
A forest made of walls.

What else am I but a wretch, a shade,
Cast from what I once had made,
But now defile in the way
That leaves it hollow glimmer?

Nothing more than nothing less,
A nothing none would deign to bless,
Coated in a tangled mess
That makes this sorry sinner.
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Re: Five Hydrating Solutions You WON'T BELIEVE!

Post by Orion_Genesis99 » Mon Jun 05, 2017 9:09 pm

I was expecting like a jpeg of Billy May's and a list of drinks and stuff I got clickbaited hardcore :/
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